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Segan Brooke ([personal profile] interceptive) wrote in [community profile] falnerestate 2014-09-25 12:42 pm (UTC)

Actually, he didn't say much of anything. He only went around, zoning in on people who were lagging behind or who had committed a mistake.

[ He had come over to her, adjusted her footwork, quipped about her aim, and left it at that. Some of her classmates had been worse off, but most of them had been on part with her. ]

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